Writing a paragraph

Pick a topic that you know lots about or that you enjoy.  Now watch this little video that a grade 8 student made about writing a proper paragraph:

http://goanimate.com/go/movie/0IghxLbJ4ZzE?utm_source=emailshare&uid=0sSLrzv-_42Y

Haha.

Write a paragraph of at least 7 sentences total that includes an opening sentence, 4 or 5 details that go with the opening, and then a concluding sentence that wraps it all up.  The concluding sentence usually restates your opening sentence in a different way.  (the final sentences is NOT "And that is the end of my paragraph.")  ;)

Don't forget to RE-READ it and correct any mistakes before sending it!

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